SAT 1390 也能錄取夢校紐約大學(xué)

申請類型

本科新生

教育經(jīng)歷

2017.09 – 2020.05 Charles Wright Acaemy 美高 3.65/4.0

語言/標(biāo)化考試成績

TOEFL101 SAT1390

工作經(jīng)歷

無

實習(xí)經(jīng)歷

1. Archaeology Intern

I went to Xi'an, Shaanxi, China to participate in an archaeology internship which was about the First Emperor of Qin's sacrificial offering ceremonies

2. Archaeology Intern

I went to Portugal to participate in an archaeology internship to stuy the lifestyles of Neanerthals.

3. Presient of the National History Day Club

As the presient, I took the responsibility of organizing my teammates' essay topics an holing regular iscussions.

4. Stuent of Professor Paul Cheney

I ha iscussions with Professor Paul Cheney of University of Chicago regaring the French Revolution an its impact an negative effects on France.

5. Volunteer

I have spent an hour almost every Sunay in the past years to take care of the homeless (cooking an chatting) in the nearby shelter.

6. China Social Assistance Founation Remote Teacher

I joine the volunteer work of the China Social Assistance Founation an provie remote online English lessons to chilren in remote areas.

7. Member of the International Friens Club

I have been a member of the International Friens Club an collaborate with other international stuents to hol activities.

8. Cross Country & Track Competition

I signe up for the Cross Country competitions after I went to the U.S. I have joine matches of 100 meters, 4*100 meters relay, an long jump.

科研經(jīng)歷

獎項/證書

American Mathematics Competition Ranke School No. 2

申請結(jié)果

院校

專業(yè)

結(jié)果

University of California San Diego

Anthropology - Archaeology, B.A.

錄取

University of California Berkeley

East Asian Religion, Thought, an Culture, B.A.

拒錄

University of California Los Angeles

Anthropology (B.A.), B.A.

拒錄

University of California Davis

Anthropology, A.B./B.S.

錄取

University of California Irvine

East Asian Cultures, B.A.

錄取

University of California Santa Barbara

Anthropology, B.A.

Archaeology Emphasis

拒錄

University of Washington-Seattle

Anthropology

錄取

New York University

Anthropology

錄取

Boston University

Archaeology

錄取

Case Western Reserve University

Anthropology

拒錄

Northeastern University

Asian Stuies

拒錄

University of Wisconsin-Maison

Anthropology

Waitlist

University of Southern California

Archaeology

拒錄

Washington University in St. Louis

Archaeology

拒錄

Emory University

Anthropology

拒錄

Boston College

Unecie

Waitlist

Santa Clara University

Anthropology

錄取

Pennsylvania State University

Anthropology

錄取

背景分析

學(xué)生優(yōu)勢：相應(yīng)經(jīng)歷豐富 專業(yè)較為冷門 成績也不錯

學(xué)生劣勢：SAT相對偏低

文書思路

學(xué)生的Common主文書是講挫折如何影響了他，他從挫折中學(xué)到了什么。挑選之后我決定采用他參加數(shù)學(xué)競賽的素材來作為Common主文書。學(xué)生第一年因為準備時間緊張加上對這個競賽不熟悉而沒有考好。第二年再接再厲，向自己的數(shù)學(xué)老師請教，又自學(xué)了不少東西。不過在第二次考試前他緊張得睡不著，最后是聽自己手機里以前錄下的自己激勵自己的話，覺得這個準備的過程已經(jīng)很令自己滿意了，無論考成什么樣都沒有遺憾了，然后安心入睡的。最后學(xué)生取得了校內(nèi)第二名的成績，并明白失敗不能定義自己，重整旗鼓再接再厲就可以成功。

學(xué)生的經(jīng)歷和素材很多，我根據(jù)不同學(xué)校的不同問題進行了相應(yīng)調(diào)整。在Coalition的UW文書里提到了學(xué)生親人的離去，在UC的文書里提到了自己對歷史和考古的鐘愛。再比如有考古專業(yè)的學(xué)校我會在文書里著重提學(xué)生的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷，有問學(xué)生能給學(xué)校帶來什么的題目我會寫對歷史和考古社團的建設(shè)等。并結(jié)合每個學(xué)校的情況來編輯文書。NYU的文書里提到了他初中去紐約，陰差陽錯旁聽了一節(jié)NYU的討論課的有緣經(jīng)歷。

申請總結(jié)

總體而言，學(xué)生條件不錯，GPA、托福和SAT都屬于中上，有著對歷史學(xué)和考古學(xué)的熱愛以及豐富的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷，再加上美高的申請背景讓他的錄取還是較為不錯的。他的心思比較細膩，素材豐富，溝通過程也較為順暢。不過學(xué)生的性格較為拖沓，加上時差以及他身體的原因，有時聯(lián)系不上，所以也提醒我之后在節(jié)奏的把控上要更加注意，以及如果學(xué)生開始提供的素材不盡如人意，還需要文案更用心地去發(fā)掘合適的內(nèi)容。此外，他有幾所學(xué)校因為Counselor的材料不齊而導(dǎo)致拒錄，這方面還需要文案和顧問及時溝通，以免出現(xiàn)類似情況。

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